This is the final piece which has now been put on Fergus' hard drive ready for submission. There were slight changes made to the titles, and the music has changed coming towards the end of the sequence. My reasoning for that change was due to the feedback given from Simon as he felt the music in the 2nd edit suited rather than the clash of the muffled sound fading into the ambient sound.
My overall view and feeling towards the final edit is that i've accomplished all that I could of done with the feedback that was given to me. My personal view on the finished product is that it is shot relatively well, with a clear plot and narrative which doesn't stray from it. There definitely could of been room for improvement in some technical aspects but as this is my first project i'm content with the level of standard it is.
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