TV News - 2nd Edit feedback with Sam

Having had our first edit session with Helen and her feedback being applied with effect, we then had Sam look at our work. Sam thought the sequence had cohesiveness, a theme and a good aesthetic. 
However he did have some constructive criticism, and potential enhancements to consider before handing it over: 
- Include more graphics over title sequences
- Get rid of the Mum shot
- More visuals to words
- Colour correcting needed doing
- Sound levels needed checking
- Find the right music that will fit with the tone of the piece

Overall the feedback was taken on board, progression is being made and we're working collectively to ensure the complete product is what we want.