First Edit - Feedback
With our first rough cut edit complete, we knew there was still a process of development with the documentary so Zoe viewed it to give us some much needed critical feedback.
Zoe
- The structure was too linear, it needed more creativity from the dull riddled timeline that it currently was. Obviously we just wanted to get everything down on the timeline but this was key to giving us some rather creative inspirations of our own.
- Make it more interesting and that would be achieved by changing the order of the footage.
(In the editing suite)
Sam
- Sam agreed with everything Zoe had mentioned above.
- The audio was very sketchy and needed some serious patching up. We knew though that the sound issues would probably come towards the end of the editing as we felt we were fairly confident on how we would resolve those issues.
As well as this we needed more establishing shots to link up the separate sequences more fluidly and naturally, adding to the general aesthetic and authenticity of the documentary.
All in all the feedback was on a more positive note than negative, leaving us content with where we were up to at our current stage in the process.
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