Feedback: Zoe & Helen

Feedback Session

So we had our final feedback session with Zoe & Helen today and it went as well as it could of went. I felt going into it that there were definitely certain parts of our documentary narrative that needed further inspection and dissecting, as to what points and leads to follow and what ones to forget about. 

- Speaking with Zoe & Helen we were told to look more into the crash and claim schemes that was seemingly on the rise. 

- Find a strong narrative, what that would be would soon arise to us later on.

- Scrap the 'challenge' concept of taking away Alex's car, as it was a slightly weak and not very thought provoking idea to push forward our documentary. 

- Find stats proving our correlation to be correct and go from there. 

Overall the session was key in shaping our ideas once again and as this was pretty much just before we were about to get further into our ideas in terms of shooting it, there was indeed a significance to the words that were discussed.